You have been working hard on your QWILS over the last 2 months. Please post your QWILS from today's in-class reading. Be sure to write in full and complete sentences and pay attention to proper spelling, capitals, punctuation, etc. Don't forget to go back and check the blog to read the other QWILS that have been posted.
OPTIONAL WORK: Feel free to respond to the QWILS and answer some of your classmates' questions.
Q-I am wondering what is the secret he keeps talking about?
ReplyDeleteQ-How did none of bones break after everything that happened?
W-I was amazed that none of his bones were broken after everything.
W-I was amazed by all of the insects that were attacking him
I-I have an image of the birds singing in the trees
I-I have an image of brian's eye's swollen so badly that they were almsot shut.
L-"The memory was like a knife cutting into him. Slicing deep into him with hate" this is a deep and meaningful sentence.
L-"His legs were on fire, and his forehead felt as if somebody had been pounding on it with a hammer" this is another deep and meaningful sentence
Q
ReplyDelete- What is the secret that ended Brian's parents marriage?
- What was Brian's mother doing with the blond haired man? Does it have something to do with the secret?
W
- I thought "Oh wow" when Brian said he was coughing, spitting and sneezing out insects.
- I thought "Oh wow" when Brian said he was lucky that he didn't land a little to the left or else he would have been killed by the rocks.
I
- I can visualize Brian and his friend Terry zooming around on their ten speed bikes on the trail.
- I can visualize Brian being completely bitten to the breaking point by the bugs.
L
- I found hoarse to be an interesting word.
- With it came some warmth, small bits of it at first, and with the heat came clouds of insects-thick, swarming hordes of mosquitoes that flocked to his body, made a living coat on his ex-posed skin, clogged his nostrils when he inhaled, poured into his mouth when he opened it to take a breath.
Chapter 4
ReplyDeleteFor Q I did,where was Brian when the plane crashed.
Why was Brian thinking about his mom when he was still knocked out.
For W I did wow Brian survived the huge plane crash. I was surprised when Brian tryed to land the plane.
For I I did, he raised himself and crawledout of the water, grunting with the pain of movement.
The plane had crashed and sunk in the lake and he had somehow pulled free.
For l I did, memory, massively, attempt, dreamless, viciously, agony.
(REVISED)
ReplyDeleteQ-I am wondering what is the secret he keeps talking about?
Q-How did none of bones break after everything that happened?
W-I was amazed that none of his bones were broken after everything.
W-I was amazed by all of the insects that were attacking him.
I-I have an image of the birds singing in the trees.
I-I have an image of Brian’s eye's swollen so badly that they were almost shut.
L-"The memory was like a knife cutting into him. Slicing deep into him with hate" this is a deep and meaningful sentence.
L-"His legs were on fire, and his forehead felt as if somebody had been pounding on it with a hammer" this is another deep and meaningful sentence.
Q: 1: I wonder why Brain keeps on saying the secret.
ReplyDelete2: How did he survive from the plane crash?
W: 1: "Oh wow" when Brain is screaming and saying he is going to die.
2: "Oh wow" when Brain was all bloody from the crash.
I: 1: I can able to visualize when Brian saw the birds singing and he is going to die.
2: I can able to visualize when the crash happened.
L: 1: The memory was like a knife cutting into him gave me great image that how Brain feeling.
2: swarming hordes of mosquitoes that flocked to his body sentences gave me a great image how many mosquitoes were there.
Q-What was the strange feeling that Brian had in the last paragraph of chapter 4.
ReplyDeleteQ-What had injered Brian so much that he compland about in the book half the time.
W-What made me say "WOW" was what Brian did do to diseve what happened.
W-What made me say "WOW" was when Brian crashed the plane and did not suffere a broken leg or anything.
I-I could image Brian washed up on the shore after he crashed the plane.
I-I could image when the mosquitos by the dosens were swarming around Brian on the shore.
L-What does wincing mean I think it means grunting in pian.
L-What does abating mean i think it means like some kind of animal.
Q
ReplyDelete- What is the secret Brian keeps saying?
- Why is life a horible memory?
W
- I said "Oh Wow" when Brian scremed because they were crashing.
- I sais "Oh Wow" when Brian was spitting, and coughing out insects.
I
- I had an image of Brian getting out of the water because they landed there.
- I had an image of Brians eyes shutting because hes eyes were swelling up.
L
- "Brians legs were on fire, and his forehead had felt like someone had smased a hammer on it."
- "His memory was like a knife cutting into him, It was slicing deep into him with hate."
Q- I had a question when he was talking about "the secret "
ReplyDeleteQ- I had a question when the crash was happening, didn't anybody notice?
W- I said " oh wow! " when he was still dreaming while the crash was still going on!
W- I said " oh wow " when there was so many insects around him that he was coughing them up!
I- I had an image when Brian was dreaming and saw his mom and his friend smiling at him.
I- I had an image when there was swarms of mosquitoes coming at him.
L-The memory was like a knife cutting into him.
L-"His legs were on fire.
Q- What this horrible secret could be? Why does it cause Brian so much pain?
ReplyDeleteW- My “wow” is when Brian remembered the pilot was in the lake still strapped to his seat.
I- My image is the bright sun rising over the glimmering lake
L- My language is “the memory was like a knife cutting into him”
Q- How could Brian survive the violent crash without sustaining any serious injuries?
W- My “wow” is when the book said Brian didn’t break or fracture any bones
I- My image is a reflection of a large black bird on the lake
L- my language was the word “abated”
Q- Was Brian's mom really cheating on Brian's dad or was it just a misunderstanding?
ReplyDeleteQ- What happend to the pilots body?
W- I said "Oh Wow" when Brian saw his mom riding with the blonde headed man Brian didn't know.
W- I said "Oh Wow" when the insects were all over Brian.
I- I saw a clear image of the lightly grey coloured sky and the sun rising very slowly.
I- I saw a clear image of the blonde headed man wearing a clear white shirt while riding the station wagon.
L- A word I found intresting was haze. I'm not sure if it's a colour but it sounds cool.
L- A word I saw that caught my eye was ridge, I have always seen this word but I never understood what it meant.
@ Everyone - Please feel free to respond to some of the responses by answering some of the questions. Remember to use the '@ so and so' format to indicate who you are responding to.
ReplyDeleteQ: Is that man Brian's dad? If not who?
ReplyDeleteQ: Is Brian still alive after the plane crash?
Q: What does the "L" mean on page 39?
Q: What does the "V" mean on page 41?
Q: Is Brian enjoying the wild with all the nice sounds?
W: Wow! I can't believe Brian remembered all those numbers!
W: Wow! it must be a shock to know that your still alive after a plane crash.
W: Wow! I can't believe that if the plane had gone left a little, it would of hit the rocks!
I: An image that popped to my head on page 32 was when Brian hit the station wagon.
I: Another image that I had was when Brian crawled out of the water in pain.
L: Abated- and some of the sharp pane had abated-there were many dull aches.
L: "Keening throb" - worst was a keening throb in his head.
L: Mound- almost like a mound out over his eyes.
L: Remnants- He pulled the torn remnants.
L: Spruce- made up of pines and spruce.
And those were my QWIL's today!:)
Q one q i have is whats brians moms secret
ReplyDeleteQ another one is why is sleeping all brian can do
Wone part that mad me goe wow was when brian said his memory was like a knife stabbing him.
W another one was when brian thought of the pilot in the wreck
I of him remembering the plane crash
L Grazed
L Hummocks
Q-What is the secret that split Brian's parents up.
ReplyDeleteQ-Did anyone notice the plane crashing
W-I said "Oh Wow" when Brian escaped from the crash unharmed.
W-I said "Oh Wow" when Brian's mom was with another man.
I-I created a clear image when the author was describing the man in the car with Brian's mom.
I-When Brian woke up on the shore trying to remember how he got out of the plane.
L-The memory was like a knife cutting into him, slicing in deep with hate. I think this sentence is very deep and meaningful.
L-Hoarse, I have no idea what this word means, but it does sound cool.
@ Everyone - Please give reasons for your 'W's". Give more support for your responses.
ReplyDeleteQ: What island has Brian crashed onto?
ReplyDeleteQ: I wonder who was the man in the car with his mother?
W: I was shocked, when Brian's mother was with another man, because shes married.
W: I was surprised when Brian described the pain he was in, because I didn't think he would be that injured.
I: I can visualize an image in my head of the mosquitoes attacking Brian, and drinking his blood.
I: I can create a clear image of Brian being bruised and eyes being swollen.
L:I found it interesting when the author compared Brian's headache to a person pounding a hammer on his on head.
L: The word 'hoarse' is one word I found interesting, because I never heard it before.
Q-Is Brian`s mom cheating on his dad?
ReplyDeleteQ-Is Brian going to try to rescue the pilot from the sunken plane?
W-"Oh wow" Brian was mad at the birds because they are singing.
W-"Oh wow" Brian was trying to use the torn windbreaker as shelter.
I-I could imagine Brian`s secret about his mom.
I-I could imagine Brian in all his pain after the crash.
L-As if someone had been pounding on it with a hammer.
L-Worst was a keening throb in his head.
Q: Where was he and why was he hurt real bad? Why did they fly away and will they come back to him?
ReplyDeleteW: I said, "wow" because Brian has such a good memory. I thought, "wow" when Brian was describiing himself and comparing himself to a movie.
I: I created an image of his Mom sitting with a man and I wondered if she was cheating on her husband. I created an image of Brian looking at the sunset and making it sound so beautiful.
L: His forehead felt as if someone had been pounding on it with a hammer and his legs felt like they were on fire. His forehead felt massively swollen to touch and almost like a mound over his eyes.
Q- One of the questions I had was, what exactly was the "secret"?
ReplyDeleteQ- I wonder how did the birds go down into the water?
W- A part in the chapter which surprised me was when Brian's mom was in the car with another man. What was she doing in there?
W- A part in the chapter which made me say "oh wow" was when Brian survived the plane crash without being badly injured. I thought that when people survive a plane crash, they either brake a bone or have bruises all around.
I- A clear image appeared when Brian was trying to get out of the water with all the energy he had.
I- Another image I had was when the mosquitos has made a coat on Brian.
L- "As the thickness of sleep left him, the world came back."
L- "Nothing broken. Just battered around a bit"
(REVISED FOR "W" PART)
ReplyDeleteQ: Is that man Brian's dad? If not who?
Q: Is Brian still alive after the plane crash?
Q: What does the "L" mean on page 39?
Q: What does the "V" mean on page 41?
Q: Is Brian enjoying the wild with all the nice sounds?
W: Wow! I can't believe Brian remembered all those numbers when the book was talking about Brian's friend Terry.
W: Wow! it must be a shock to know that your still alive after a tragic plane crash.
W: Wow! I can't believe that if the plane had gone left a little, it would of hit the rocks and Brian would not be alive!
I: An image that popped to my head on page 32 was when Brian hit the station wagon.
I: Another image that I had was when Brian crawled out of the water in pain.
L: Abated- and some of the sharp pane had abated-there were many dull aches.
L: "Keening throb" - worst was a keening throb in his head.
L: Mound- almost like a mound out over his eyes.
L: Remnants- He pulled the torn remnants.
L: Spruce- made up of pines and spruce.
And those were my QWIL's today!:)
(Revised)
ReplyDeleteQ
- What is the secret that ended Brian's parents marriage?
- What was Brian's mother doing with the blond haired man? Does it have something to do with the secret?
W
- I thought "Oh wow" when Brian said he was coughing, spitting and sneezing out insects. There'd have to be so many bugs around to almost be choking on them.
- I thought "Oh wow" when Brian said he was lucky that he didn't land a little to the left or else he would have been killed by the rocks. If he simply would've just moved the plane a little it could have ended his life so is current pain wasn't as bad as what could have happened to him.
I
- I can visualize Brian and his friend Terry zooming around on their ten speed bikes on the trail.
- I can visualize Brian being completely bitten to the breaking point by the bugs.
L
- I found hoarse to be an interesting word.
- With it came some warmth, small bits of it at first, and with the heat came clouds of insects-thick, swarming hordes of mosquitoes that flocked to his body, made a living coat on his ex-posed skin, clogged his nostrils when he inhaled, poured into his mouth when he opened it to take a breath.
Q - Why was brian panicking so much when he was just in the water trying to get out iam wondering why did he just panick for that?
ReplyDeleteQ-Iam wondering what Brian means about a horse wissper?
W-Iam so shocked that brians head feels like a hammer hammering on his head that must really hurt!
W-Another part in the book mthat made me say wow was that i cant beleive Brian survived the plane ride!
I-I have a image of brian trying to sit up when he has a lot of pain.
I-I have a image of brians mom sitting in a station wagon.
L-A good paragraph in the book that i thought was really good was.(The memory was like a knife cutting into him.
L-Another word that they used in this chapter was ( DESTROYED).
@ Pooh Bear
ReplyDeleteQ #1
I don't think that it was Brian's dad, but I do believe that it has something to do with the secret.
Q #2
Yes.
Q #3
The "L" is the shape of the lake.
Q #4
The "V" I think was explaining the ripples in the water behind him as he swam.
Q #5
I think that Brian is currently calm (besides the mosquitoes) but soon to come I don't think that he'll be loving the wild since it will be challenge to live in since he's stuck there.
Good Questions :)
Q: Is what is the secret
ReplyDeleteQ: Will cole survuve
W:I cant beleive that brian made it and survied
W: I said wow when the masqetos attacked him like that.
I: I could see brain watching the hundreds of fish jumping out of the water and into the clear blue lake.
I: Another image i could see was brians mom sitting in the station wagon.
L: Sobbing
L: Desqished
Q-Was Brian's mom cheating on her husband,if so why didn't she tell him instead of keeping it a secret that pains Brian?
ReplyDeleteQ-Was the pain Brian was feeling from the memories of the divorce, did he ever tell?
W-"Oh wow" when Brian said the memory was like a knife cutting into him!
W- "Oh wow" The pain Brian described felt as if it was happening to me from such clear words!
I-I imagained that looking at the pitch black sky when the darkness of the night was thick.
I-I imagained when mosquitos and flies were biting Brian(I saw scars and blood)
L-he raised himself and crawled out the water GRUNTING.
L-worst was a KNEEING throb in his head.
L-hummocks.
L-but all in a HAZE all in a HAZE-WORLD
my Q.W.I.L'S for today :)
CHAPTER 4
ReplyDeleteQ - What is the secret that Brian keeps talking about?
- Why was Brian sleeping so much?
W - I couldn't believe that Brian actually survived the plane crash.
- I was in awe about how many times Brian has to bring up the secret even though it pains him to think about it.
I - I had a clear image of the dead pilot still strapped into the seat of the submerged plane with his hair waving in the blue water.
- I could clearly imagine the mosquitoes swarming around him in every direction biting at him and making him swell up.
L - I liked how the author used the sentence, "The Memory was like a knife cutting into him," to show us that it was a bad memory.
- I have never heard the word, aspen, before so it interests me.
Q-I wonder why the secret is like a knife cutting into him?
ReplyDeleteQ-Why didn't Brian ask his mom about the guy he saw?
W-I said "Oh Wow" when Brian survived the crash.
W-I said "Oh Wow" when Brian coughed the insects up, spat them out, and sneezed them out.
I-I can create a clear image when his mom was talking to another guy.
I-I can create an image of the pilot still in the plane dead.
L-I didn't know what "abated" meant.
L-I thought "hoarse" was a funny word.
Q-I wonder why Brian opened his eyes and screamed?
ReplyDeleteQ- Why did the man in the car stopped Brian when he tried to talk to his mom?
Q- I wonder why Brian said that he had luck all though, the plane crashed?
W- I was surprised when Brian said that he remembers everything in the past like the time, the temperature and the date.
I-I got a connection when Brian turned his eyes away because of the sun, shining through his eyes.
I- I had a connection when Brian said that his head didn't break but, seemed to be bruised.
I- I had a connection when Brian's eyes were swollen shut and his face puffy and round to match his battered forehead.
I-I had a connection when Brian thought that nobody ever told about bugs in the forest and only mentioned about beautiful nature.
L- What does it mean by abated?
L-Worst was a keening throb in his head that pulsed with every beat of his heart.
L- I didn't know what "aspen" mean.
Q
ReplyDelete1.Who was that person with Brians mum
2.What is the secret that Brian keeps on thinking about.
W
1.When the mosquitoes where attacking Brians back instead of the pilots body.
I
1.When the vicious mosquitoes and flies attacked Brians back.
2.When Brian wokeup and his clothes were wet and clammy.
L
1.squint,abating
2.When the author said th memory was like a knife cutting into him.